The first suggestion was to have Wilson give his friend a ride on the bicycle. So than in the last shot of the story, Wilson could give his younger brother Andre a ride home, instead of verbally apologizing.
The second suggestion which is illustrated below, Wilson get a visit from a group of friends.He rides off away on his bicycle leaving the younger brother behind. While Wilson is hanging out with his friends in the park, Andre is searching for his brother while being attacked by a dog. When it starts to get dark, Wilson decides to go home and check his younger brother. He doesn't find his younger brother home,
Wilson gets a visit from a group of friends instead of one friend
We watch Wilson leave from Andre's perspective
Second disaster that happen to Andre , a ravage dog attacks him
The gang hanging in the park
Wilson looks at the time and notices its getting late. Our he gets a sense of time because the street light
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